Why Starburst are the Best

    Starburst are hands down superior because of the flavor variety and intensity, for the better price. 
        The great variety of flavors is what will make the candy more popular. Extravagance is what makes candy what it is. If a child does not like a certain flavor, chances are they will like at least one of the others. Having only a single flavor is boring, ruining the purpose of eating the candy and decreasing the likelihood of somebody enjoying it.
         It is also the intensity of flavor that reins superior. In the common heartbreaking dilemma that children are faced with; when they may only have one candy, they will like the flavor to be more intense and last longer. This increases the value of the candy. Bland flavors will surely be worth less.
         Not only does Starburst have a greater value, but the price is drastically cheaper. If you are a person who buys candy constantly, the amounts of money that may seem like a small difference, will add up. When the value of the candy is better, and the price is cheaper, why would you not choose it?
         The supporters of M and M's believe that their candy is better fot three false reasons: they are made of real chocolate, they are not sticky, and they make a person happy. I assume that 'not sticky', is suggesting that Starburst is sticky, which is wrong. On top of that, M and Ms are only not sticky when cold. Once they are in your hands, those artificial colors get all over the place. also, I have no idea what they mean by 'makes you happy'. Maybe chocolate will upset somebody. I know I will be angry when my hands are covered in sticky, artificial colors. 

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Why 12 Year-olds should Swim 1500

In the Bahamas, the 1500m freestyle is not an optional event until a swimmer is in the 13-14 or 15-17 age group. The reason behind this is most likely because in international meets, the 1500 is not swum in the 11-12 age group. However, I think that we should be allowed to swim it so we can have practice in swimming the event. The other countries in the Caribbean do not have this issue. In the other countries with swim teams that perform well, the mile is quite a good event, this is because the distance swimmers have experience in the event, and this brings in more points for the country.  In the Bahamas, a distance swimmer may not be as successful until they are old enough. The Bahamas swim team, in the most recent Carifta, had only one swimmer in the 1500, and he was a 17 year old. By not letting them swim the event, it is discouraging to the swimmers, and it causes the Bahamas’ problem of lacking in distance events. After Carifta 2013, the head of the Bahamas Swimming Federation himself, said that we need to improve our performance in the distance events, so why would he not make it an option? Knowing that the distance events are less popular, it would encourage a young person to try, because they may do well. Making the event optional will encourage the swimmers and coaches to train for and try to do it, this would make the event more popular, making it a fast and competitive event, and overall improving the performance of the Bahamas’ swim teams.

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